Rustling Wind

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Dec 2003 · 4 comments

Listen carefully to the quiet rustling wind for there is a message that God will send As thoughts are racing through your mind with the silent messages you will find The answer to all our worldly grief's lay hidden beneath those rustling leaves When we believe we are all standing alone listen sincerely for the answer is shown We are as children waiting, in despair without abilities, so unaware For the answers lay within our own being with the promise that God is overseeing God's rustling wind, leads to a promised land just look beside you, and there he will stand Laura Brewer

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[7] horus8 8-Dec-03/1:49 PM Reply

The last time I looked beside me? There was a hobo taking a shit in this lady down the streets Jade plant.

[9] The_Third_Isis 9-Dec-03/11:05 PM Reply

you get a 9. for the elegance as oposed to hobos in 8t's hood. The contrast is finese, style and grace.
It's 2 a.m. and I'm of to dream with that vision in your poem thank you.A promice we all forget about at times.

[n/a] Bachus › The_Third_Isis 9-Dec-03/11:35 PM Reply

You wouldn't know a promise if it fell out of your cunt and you named it. I should know. I fell out of your cunt. Micah, asked me today why you didn't say goodbye? I told him that it was because worms can't talk, they can only dig. Do me a favor not because you want to, but because you need to. Keep your family and friends away from my family. I've never cared for any of you yo be quite honest. And if you think I've ever cared for Bill or his? You're wrong I wouldn't slow down to avoid hitting any of you in the road dead or alive as a matter of a fact. And in the future, please tell your sister to not call me on your behalf anymore, for any reason. That includes weddings, births, deaths, blood tranfusions all the way down to borrowing some sugar. It's the least you could do, but as far as things you've done for me go? It's the most important.

[5] dancin_n_da_moonlite 9-Apr-05/9:53 AM Reply

i'm sorry but there is no answer to all the worldy grief's - that is one question that has puzzled philosophers for centuries