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Villanelle № 77361

From Hell, a Vilanelle

by horus8

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Dec 2003 · Edited 8 Dec 2003 · 6 comments

You can pack your shit, and go to Hell. But thank you for the one-way mirror. You were never real, just a Vilanelle. Totally Coconuts, and trapped in a shell. My crystal ball has never been clearer. You can pack your shit, and go to Hell. I have a prophecy that I'd like to sell. Of a jejune worm consuming love with terror. But I will never tell, my Vilanelle. Fuck you, fuck them, and FUCK that evangelical New Age bullshit. I see through your exterior. So you can pack your shit, and go to Hell. Narcissistic Pandora, and YES, 'unreliable'. Your heart is a sinkhole, your skin veneer. You were never real, just a Vilanelle. Anti Osmosis, and not permeable Go look up the word whippersnapper. Then pack your shit, and go to Hell You were my last Vilanelle.

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6 comments

[9] kingit 8-Dec-03/9:34 PM Reply
Don't need no shit packed where I'm going! Vilanelle? hmmm, uhhh, villain-ess maybe?- ahh fuck, I give up, haven't seen one of them there (French?) dictionaries in a while. Fun read!
[9] darby pyn › kingit 8-Dec-03/11:32 PM Reply
Punk rock accolades. a 9 for you horus 8
[5] Bobjim 10-Dec-03/1:14 PM Reply
Average. Not nearly random or insane enough.
[n/a] horus8 › Bobjim 10-Dec-03/3:03 PM Reply
You know very little, and you have even less.
[9] SupremeDreamer 10-Dec-03/6:25 PM Reply
Well, good vil.. very personal comments here.. feel like a peeper reading them, but reminds me of alot of things.. I'll shut-up now before it seems like I'm intruding.

Anyway- blessed with nine.
[9] INTRANSIT 25-May-05/7:32 AM Reply
Too funny!