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lost...

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Dec 2003 · 6 comments

First I was lost in an ocean of tears, cause you said you didn't love me anymore. But now... My heart is cold it's frozen... You can't reach me Nobody can reach me I am lost in my own world, a world without feelings, a world without love...

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[n/a] SupremeDreamer 18-Dec-03/7:54 AM Reply

ok, now if your going to write in self pity.. could you atleast TRY you know ATTEMPT to do it in an artistic and creative fashion or something??

This sounds like a fucking therapy session, or more like a public BOO-HOO-HOO classic cliche teenage "I'm lonely and unloved blah blah"

Fuck.. get a journal. And your from belgium? This might be the stupidest joke ever concieved and carried out, really now.

Whats next? The infamous internet suicide note?

[n/a] Tineke 18-Dec-03/7:59 AM Reply

yes I live in Belgium, so...?! get normal.
If this is the way I feel... what about...

[n/a] SupremeDreamer › Tineke 18-Dec-03/8:18 AM Reply

A journal is perfect for spewing out that emotional goo..

Or you can turn that goo into something that atleast resembles a poem.. which would require some "imagination"..

Then theres the heavy sarcasm and cynical approach, which atleast offers the possibility of inciting an occasional chuckle.

If all else fails, go hug your school counselor? SHED LOVE TO SEE YOUR JOURNAL *cough* I mean "poems"...

[n/a] Tineke › SupremeDreamer 18-Dec-03/9:56 AM Reply

what is the matter with you? frustrated or something...?

[n/a] Everyone › Tineke 18-Dec-03/4:12 PM Reply

Yes he is. He once wrote a poeme with "Belgium" in the title and some people mocked it, much to his dismay. I daresay he has decided to vent his fury on the nearest Belgian thing... which happens to be you. Catch you later in funky town.

http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=72477

[0] ChaseValentine 27-Apr-05/2:51 PM Reply

Linkin Park? Is that you?