Ongoing

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Dec 2003 · Edited 21 Dec 2003 · 4 comments

Life traced as a breath and a heart beat Some fast others slow Too many too often wasted One day all will know Thoughts and idleness kept to myself No concern since nobody sees A farce sometimes kept contently by me My convinced ignorance is only a tease

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4 comments

[n/a] tadpole 21-Dec-03/8:45 PM Reply

just wanted to start a poem

[9] horus8 22-Dec-03/12:30 AM Reply

not bad.

[10] sliver 22-Dec-03/9:02 PM Reply

Anxiously awaiting more. Good thoughts, eternity is waiting for all

[10] francis nor capule 19-Apr-04/4:08 AM Reply

not bad.not bad at all.