poemranker ::You.. by Ariella

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Free verse № 78101

You..

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Dec 2003 · 3 comments

I dreamt about you last night, I know things will never be the same. Why is it TIME has no mercy? Especially to those who CHOOSE to blame? I subconsiously carry our every moment, Our memories were nothing but the best, But EVERYTIME i am reminded, I RELIVE the things I'd rather forget. I am haunted by our past Yet the future never looked so bright. But today I struggle to find my centre, And make sense of what I dreamt last night. Are you sending me ESP messages? Am i fooling myself of your ghost? Is it Taboo to have wanted your ALL? But NOT give up what I wanted most? Desicions........ TIME dragged on to circumstance, Once again another chapter to an end. I cant even call to say hi, let alone acknowledge you WERE my friend.

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3 comments

[5] horus8 22-Dec-03/12:37 AM Reply
Please, if you are going to give me a 5? Learn how to fucking spell. "subconscious" you twit. here's your five back, buy a dictionary.
[5] horus8 22-Dec-03/12:38 AM Reply
Also, an ellipse? Is ".."... Three dots chief, you'll learn that in highschool, or not.
[5] sliver 22-Dec-03/9:22 PM Reply
I went to High School for more than lunch.

(GYM)