poemranker ::Winter Is Stil by blueyes

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 78267

Winter Is Stil

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Dec 2003 · 0 comments

Sound settling like leaves dying on beds of autumn Winter is on its heels. Even through the raspy breath of winters solemn cry, the stars seem to stand brighter; fighting the cold and death of earth retreating to nest in the womb of mothers belly until it is time to be born again. And I may branch out my beauty this evening just to stretch and feel what's missing in the winter of my heart: New year dawning I may find my seeds in bloom But for now I revel in the stillness of sound and beauty in loss. We all must retreat: discover what is fleeting in the breath of winter.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 4.67 weighted 4.96 rank 8598 views 211 View voting details →

3 votes so far. Yours would make 4.3 votes so far

0 comments

Nobody has said anything yet.