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Why Daddy?

Member since 2004 · Posted 6 Jan 2004 · 1 comment

Daddy did you love my mommy? If not why'd you put me in her tummy? She had the doctors take me away. Before you could tell her to let me stay. I didn't get to live my life. I never got to feel the sun light. Why in the world did she do it? Why didn't she give me the chance to prove it? I could have loved her with all my heart. If only she'd given it a chance to start. Now I'm stting with God up above. Wishing she would have given me love. --cmr-- 2/22/99

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[6] JoyLuck 6-Jan-04/10:57 PM Reply
lovely
the kindergarten ryhmes realy put me into the scene