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Dance in my Golden Shower (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
Yes, my legs quiver with joy
as this amber rivulet
douses your indignant expression
and drips off your cheeks.
Its a euphoric sight to see-
somewhat erotic when you squint
and answer the sting with a groan;
muttering in your discomposure
to convey your dissent.
Theres no trace of shame
in my wry grin,
Not a hint of regret
in these twinkling eyes;
as always I remain blithe
and amused.
Blame yourself,
for relaxing my bladder
and the resulting laughter.
You danced for rain-
it fell as golden streamlets of warmth,
disinfecting your foul voice
and putrid feet;
appreciate the free shower
and know this:
You shall never be clean
until you're tinged amber
and left glistening.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.875
Weighted score: 5.5042653
Overall Rank: 2675
Posted: January 6, 2004 4:27 PM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2004 4:27 PM PST
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