poemranker ::Wicked Corruption by devilishnutcase

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Wicked Corruption

by devilishnutcase

Member since 2004 · Posted 7 Jan 2004 · 5 comments

Wicked corruption, Settling the mind, Mass confusion, To pass the time, Burning buildings, Screaming people, All aroused, By the falling church steeple, Let him hang on the cross, Just another soul that was lost, Wicked corruption, Caressing the pain, Screaming people , Dying in vain, Bleeding souls, Pools of blood , Making the dirt into red mud, Wicked Corruption

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5 comments

[7] richa 7-Jan-04/2:46 PM Reply
All aroused? - surely some more creative use of language would better communicate your point.
[10] little_big_nose › richa 7-Jan-04/6:19 PM Reply
shut the hell up, this is a great poem...it's got a message, it's got a tone, it has everything a great poem needs
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › little_big_nose 8-Jan-04/1:23 AM Reply
Are you rankervilles long lost inner child?

Beware: answering this question might affect your health, with side effects such as diarrhoea, migraines, spontaneous loss of bladder control & brain tumors.
[7] richa › little_big_nose 8-Jan-04/3:01 AM Reply
Not a comment on this poem, but what you describe is not a poem it is the manifestation of smugness. The antithesis of poetry.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › richa 8-Jan-04/4:59 AM Reply
Excuse me, I can't help wonder in my unfortunate curiosity but honestly?

What the fuck did you say, if anything?

Because I think you just nuked the target senseless somehow.