EXIT (this way)

Member since 2004 · Posted 16 Jan 2004 · 4 comments

In a senseâ¦ In sex, Innocent insects Explore incest. Imagineâ¦ In depth, Dying in life Then living in death. â¦ I'm somewhat upset. So to forget my fall, I'll simply reset it all. â¦ â¦ Memories make lifeâ¦ Memories in death make me live. â¦ â¦ â¦ If you do not forget me, I'll never die.

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[n/a] INTRANSIT 16-Jan-04/6:50 AM Reply

You're finding your ears. Repeating the sounds of vowels is called assonance. Repeating the sounds of consonants is called alliteration. There's no problem with taking a rap-style approach to poetry, I would still recommend studying (proper) poetry. It will help you say what you are intending to. Like I recommend to many others, get a copy of: Poetry for dummies. I have one. It's easy to understand and a great basic tool.

[n/a] richa › INTRANSIT 16-Jan-04/8:32 AM Reply

Isn't repeating the sounds of consonants called consonance?

[n/a] richa › INTRANSIT 16-Jan-04/8:36 AM Reply

http://members.aol.com/lucyhardng/pointers/index1.htm is a cool rescource too.

[n/a] imperfect_creation › richa 16-Jan-04/2:51 PM Reply

thank you. I will look into it.