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Free verse № 79625

How rifted

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Jan 2004 · 3 comments

The rift between us is thinner than trust, all things taken into a heaven forsaken, follow this logic into my lack of the tragic, shadows of december, years of false magic Constant creatures of hapless habits I stumble on corpses in this sea of senses laughing so loudly as they claw at the fences yet sitting as silent as my darkest defenses Never not known for the sake of alone imagining the faded, my facade, my throne this dance is a distance a chane for a changing the radicals were free and often arranging.

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[n/a] horus8 17-Jan-04/12:17 PM Reply
The best thing about this poem is your name.
[n/a] horus8 17-Jan-04/12:18 PM Reply
Tell me though what were the 'radicals' arranging? Another stupid fucking 7 Eleven for you and your friends to stand in front of after school?
[n/a] Crakyamuni › horus8 17-Jan-04/4:57 PM Reply
Physics, taoism, and the merry making of old english 40's.
Horus you are a visionary! It's like you know the real me!
are you single? Or just rampant? Thanks for the commentary. I hope you enjoy my misspellings and overreacins.