poemranker ::The back of a shovel? by horus8

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 79673

The back of a shovel?

by horus8

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Jan 2004 · Edited 17 Jan 2004 · 5 comments

Against your fucking face. Then a stale cigarette, and sex with a blow up doll I keep next to the muddy boots in my closet.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 7.00 weighted 6.00 rank 1276 views 289 View voting details →

10 votes so far. Yours would make 11.10 votes so far

5 comments

[n/a] Shuushin 17-Jan-04/5:39 PM Reply
"Then..." I think?

good one.
[n/a] horus8 › Shuushin 17-Jan-04/6:01 PM Reply
Yes, I always was a quick lay, thanks.
[10] sk8rs_rule_all 17-Jan-04/6:11 PM Reply
Damn, reminds me of my friend....the sad pathetic yet poetic soul.
[8] Patsy 18-Jan-04/10:46 PM Reply
writing from real life?
[7] basit_i 21-Jan-04/1:33 PM Reply
hmm. imagery is intense, at any rate. for whatever that's worth. ^_^