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Free verse № 79826

Fool

Member since 2004 · Posted 20 Jan 2004 · 2 comments

I was deranged and confused you seemed amused with my misery and pain drowning in the rain i hang on to your every word i want to cry when you hurt to kiss you makes me weep the taste of your lips haunts me in my sleep i never got to say goodbye now all that is left is a lie i need relief a message sent to me to find out if we were meant to be everyday withouy u is empty and cold a deep void is tearing at my soul you made me complete i must accept defeat and realize im all alone avert your eyes i'll pretend not to cry for your sake i will be strong and try to move on i've been replaced you've said this to my face you may not want me to but i will always love you as crazy as it may seem you are the image of my dreams i still believe it is real i'll sleep so i dont have to feel

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[10] penguin fiend 20-Jan-04/6:52 PM Reply
pretend i gave you a 10.5, cuz this is better than most of the perfect poems out there
[10] deleted user 28-Jan-04/7:29 AM Reply
i really like this one id give it a 10+ but youll have to setle with a mere 10