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Last love poem

Member since 2004 · Posted 20 Jan 2004 · 5 comments

I love you but nothng can't hide The tears that come from my invisible eyes I know you can't see my pain Beause your heart screams my name Love makes us all wonder blindly Only after blindness can we truely see Why the feelings we have exist Gentle as a morning mist Come with me, no regrets When I'm with you I never forget My reason for living Because your heart is so giving

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[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> 20-Jan-04/7:36 PM Reply

You've been writing for awhile, and this is what you've arrived at?

[n/a] penguin fiend › <{Baba^Yaga}> 21-Jan-04/3:53 PM Reply

Learn to read douche bag, it says haven't been writing for awhile

[10] deleted user 28-Jan-04/4:15 PM Reply

This is great....i dont use punctuation...capitols, proper use of speech... or grammar either and everyone seems to hate me for it....and to me your stuff is great and i understand it...so keep doing it the way YOU like it theres no problem with it and everyone that has a problem with mis use of words and punctuatin should just kiss our no exclamation asses

[10] deleted user › deleted user 28-Jan-04/4:17 PM Reply

Agree??

[n/a] penguin fiend › deleted user 29-Jan-04/1:57 PM Reply

totally