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Free verse № 80057

Judgement

Member since 2004 · Posted 22 Jan 2004 · 2 comments

You worship the rancor It was me that you adore After your loving labotomy The door slammed right in front of me I'm hating your sinister crimes Aginst my mortal mind Take me, make it fast If you loved me you'd make it last

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[n/a] deleted user 24-Jan-04/1:19 PM Reply
I never loved you.
[8] Dovina 17-Jun-05/8:14 PM Reply
Leave "that" out of the second line and this is good.