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Free verse № 80073

Crystal Lane Swift

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Jan 2004 · Edited 23 Jan 2004 · 1 comment

She's our sweetest blackberry, full of ripe juice; So dark and so pretty and temptingly plump. Do you think I'd be guilty of sexual abuse If I bound her and gagged her and flogged her nude rump?

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[10] zodiac 23-Jan-04/8:04 AM Reply
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