My Life As a Single Teenage Girl

by Princess_Snowflake

Member since 2003 · Posted 27 Jan 2004 · 5 comments

I like being a single teenager Without dating any boys around Until I'm older enough to do it.

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[7] irishfolksuicide 27-Jan-04/1:21 PM Reply

Older enough to do it is not grammatical. Try stopping the haiku at 'until I'm older' only 23 syllables then.

[8] middenHeap › irishfolksuicide 27-Jan-04/5:21 PM Reply

NOOO!!! be careful, she edits. Take your comment back, or she will blithely delete the unintentional double entendre.

Have you read her coffee poem? lololol.

[1] zodiac 27-Jan-04/4:59 PM Reply

minus 8 for not being a haiku. Minus another 1 for not being very poetic or making any sense.

[8] middenHeap 27-Jan-04/5:18 PM Reply

Once again, you crack me up. If only you were doing it on purpose.

[1] Stacy Stewart 13-Dec-04/9:32 AM Reply

This is not a Haiku
A haiku has 5,7,5 and is about nature

Say the count was right then it would be a Senriu, those are about humans.