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Pimple № 82012

"Good Bye"

Member since 2003 · Posted 27 Jan 2004 · 4 comments

You say "Good Bye" I say "See You later" We are breaking up But we are still friends You said we can still hang out together But you ignore me You lied to me again You lit up my heart Like no one else before But you were able to burn it Like everybody else You didn't want to hurt my feelings But the wait made it worse You gave out hints Why couldn't you say no? But now you come back Wanting me more than ever But then, you realize your mistake How am i supposed to feel now? You nibbled at my heart Then you shoved it away Then you ate the whole thing Now you throw it back up Now I say "Good bye" Your love is nothing more than a game You play it, then you decide to quit To find another game to play...

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4 comments

[9] penguin fiend 27-Jan-04/6:31 PM Reply
Sorry, but I can't criticize this, i think it's really good
[10] cuddlytiger17 19-Jul-04/11:06 AM Reply
well i definitely know how this feels...
[3] Edna Sweetlove 20-May-06/4:46 PM Reply
Better than the last two, but not much. Very whiney.
[n/a] Blindpoetry › Edna Sweetlove 25-May-06/7:52 AM Reply
Like your not