Dream World

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

I walked into the room full of fog and music. The music room as I called it. I smiled to myself as the wind flirted with my hair. Oh, how I loved my rare visted dream world. I twirled in circles and circles until I was dizzy. I love this fantasy world free of pain and suffering. Free of deciet and filth. Just me and the music. Alone with the life most thrived for. Happiness is the only goal. Happiness is the only achievement.

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[4] deleted user 10-Aug-02/9:24 PM Reply

Awkward shift from concrete images to abstract ideas in lines 5 tp 6. Lines 1-5 were rather compelling but line 6 onwards sort of lost the momentum