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Free verse № 8301

The Real You

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

The pain I hold inside No longer can I hide Screaming in the night You ignore me with all your might Dehydrated from the many tears shed Remembering the deafening words said I cry and stop and cry all over again I try so hard to make amends But you see right through me And the real you I see.

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[7] ramtheman1 18-Oct-03/1:49 AM Reply
nice