Something Strong

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Aug 2002 · 2 comments

When you think I'm not there, I am when you think I dont care I do, Theres nothing else in this world that compares to the way I love my boo! I may sometimes make mistakes I regret them more then once I hope were together forever a lot more then a couple months. The way I look at you when you stare into my eyes it's like our relationship is perfect all love and truth but never lies. I like you a lot I love you tons I am here for you no matter what we have just gone through a little rut. It was like love at first sight but not really it is like we know we are meant to be i hope our love is strong enough to not let anything come between you and me.

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[0] poetandknowit 12-Aug-02/9:10 AM Reply

my dear, even hallmark here in kc misery would smirk at this rubbish. save if for your adolescent journal. this here is a poetry site - not a medium for young folks to clutter with words of misinterpreted hormones.

[3] pete 12-Aug-02/1:55 PM Reply

i dunno where p&k it gets off rubbishing your work ; just read the juvenile garbage he ( i assume ) writes . BUT imho it's not very good. Zinnai66 said it all ... keep on keeping on