poemranker ::Shadow by talking_goldfish

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Free verse № 8538

Shadow

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

the wall is but a world on which the shadow lives and all the world around awaits its next command puppets to the darkness mere pawns in one great plan and all the world around controlled by shadows dark living life in doubt a trick a joke a game and all the world around ignores this simple fact what we fail to see is that we are merely tools and all world around is just another shadow

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[5] thepinkbunnyofdoom 18-Apr-03/12:45 PM Reply
I like how you stick to one subject but this isn't all that great. -5-