Blinded by Your Kiss

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Aug 2002 · 5 comments

With everyday passing by, You always cross my mind I have been without you for so long, I've lost all track of time The echoes of your breaking heart, it haunts my dreams I can't see a damn thing and I know exactly what it means I'm blinded by your kiss I cannot take this I can't see what you truly mean to me

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[8] Redfin 12-Aug-02/9:41 PM Reply

All I can say is "RUN"

[5] OneFingerAnswer 12-Aug-02/9:45 PM Reply

I don't really see this as a lyrical poem but maybe I just missed the rhythm. Other than that I found it a nice poem.

[7] brazen 13-Aug-02/11:18 AM Reply

yep...that hit a spot...there it goes...alright...i liked it.

[7] Christof 30-Aug-02/8:17 AM Reply

I know the feeling exactly. I wish you'd gone for a more regular rhyme scheme or something to tie it all together, but I get the message loud and clear.

[7] rockinindividual 26-Dec-02/3:32 PM Reply

i like the idea, and i liked how you worded it...but it needs more...the stanzas seem too short to really pack a punch