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Free verse № 8744

Stop Staring

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

Frozen in motion, as if the world has stopped, and I notice that even I am stuck... Wherever I look, I realize that this is no longer Utopia, and that the frozen icicles are bearing down on me... The pressure is mounting, and the day is dawning, and I wonder what will happen next... So please stop staring at me... ***Written January 8th, 2002***

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[7] horus8 13-Aug-02/9:26 PM Reply
yes...i agree..but they never have anything better to do. get em!e