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Free verse № 90779

Enlightenment

by Lifeboatman

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 Feb 2004 · 4 comments

Let go and forget For there are those who remember When once the stars twinkled And summer was a joyous warmth But those who do had bled and fled Before your burning heart So let go and forget That you may again remember

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4 comments

[5] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 19-Feb-04/7:13 PM Reply
I forgot about when the stars twinkeld and summer was a joyous warmth, but then I remebered again.
[n/a] Lifeboatman › ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 19-Feb-04/7:45 PM Reply
Good for you then... I don't
[8] Shuushin 19-Feb-04/7:35 PM Reply
hey - its not bad at all.

are you trying to loose the wings?
[n/a] Lifeboatman › Shuushin 19-Feb-04/7:52 PM Reply
nah... Trying too revive it, thanks for the vote...