poemranker ::Walter by Schrodinger's Cat

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Free verse № 91285

Walter

Member since 2004 · Posted 22 Feb 2004 · 1 comment

Needles of light stab through playful leaves, Gentle music played by a gentle breeze; Colors stand as a reminder of Summer’s end. Observe it all, be amazed by what you see; Do as I sometimes do, Learn from my mistakes. A lopsided friendship, junior and senior; Lessons taught, some learned. Intentional distance (to lessen the blow?), A sinister plan: For self alone the violent hand. The mist reaches up with tenuous fingers; A pallid sky, cold to view, not a breath to disturb black waters; Ice still lingers just inches below. Youth and innocence faded from the downward glance.

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[n/a] horus8 22-Feb-04/4:25 PM Reply
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