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Opposites (Free verse) by BrandonW Sporadic yet systematic
Is the pattern and the pace
Of this thing I call my life
Neglected; dually respected
What a war I wage -
To keep my piece of mind.
Pathetic but copacetic -
No, I cant let it
Smother me this way.
Address it, dont repress it
You have a voice, express it
Your bleak cacophony.
Up the ladder:
Weep In Me
Down the ladder:
Return
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Posted: February 26, 2004 12:53 PM PST; Last modified: February 26, 2004 12:53 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9602656 Overall Rank: 8611 Comments:
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zodiac @ 67.240.192.97
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26-Feb-04/1:01 PM
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You had me until "this thing I call my life". Ugh. And congratulations on your use of the word copacetic. It's the fashizzle.
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BrandonW @ 172.147.203.240
> zodiac
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26-Feb-04/8:22 PM
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Its a good thing I had you for a whole two lines, <smirks> heh. Ugh, what would you suggest? This life I call my thing? Post script, copacetic is fo' shizzle dizzle!
Then riddle me this, oh wise one:
What is the opposite of mediocre?
Well, if mediocre is somewhere in the middle... Then somewhere just a little left of the middle is my best guess.
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