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Edd

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Mar 2004 · 5 comments

There is a name that brings a fear, Of a guy who tries to spread good cheer. He tells the most appalling puns, So those around him often run. His jokes are tasteless in extreme, Although they've never been obscene. His humour's reached a lower level, Now some suggest that he's the devil. If you don't share with him a lesson, This you'll count to be a blessing, For those who sit and listen in, Will always join a loony bin.

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[8] zodiac 24-Mar-04/9:30 AM Reply
For a second I thought this was a repost of ?-Dave Mysterious-?'s enchanting poem "EGG", which I believe you are familiar with. Sadly, it wasn't.
[n/a] Bobjim › zodiac 24-Mar-04/9:52 AM Reply
I have not read this "egg" which you mention, otherwise it might have been.
[8] zodiac › Bobjim 24-Mar-04/9:56 AM Reply
You commented on it - here (http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=67473).
[n/a] Bobjim › zodiac 24-Mar-04/10:31 AM Reply
that would have been my alter ego, Jimbob, the Lord High Dismisser of Idiocy then.
[8] Shuushin 25-Mar-04/7:15 AM Reply
rushed ending - the rest is a nice little ride.

make try some ends?