poemranker ::From the Top of Apartment Stairwells by embersandenvelopes

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From the Top of Apartment Stairwells

by embersandenvelopes

Member since 2004 · Posted 28 Mar 2004 · 3 comments

Every thought of you condenses into Blue, from the shades of your shirts to the connection of intangibilities. Like a soft oil blend it brushes across the palette, reminding me of subtleties that melt us from seperates into one, as if there was ever much distinction in the matters of attachments and heart.

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[6] deleted user 29-Mar-04/9:56 AM Reply
Does not follow the title.
[n/a] embersandenvelopes › deleted user 5-Apr-04/12:33 AM Reply
The original title is actually (Every word I never said) From the Top of Apartment Stairwells

[7] Shuushin 29-Mar-04/5:03 PM Reply
A tastey snippet - but needs more to be more.