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Scattered Spaces (Free verse) by embersandenvelopes
In the absence of green, I am filled by one-block notations
on scattered spaces and narrow stairwells.
The concrete stings the sky while the clips below and
criss-crossed highways above house the scent of Krispie Kremes.
Then we are exposed- me in my uncertainty and everything else
in its armour. From traffic caught like a spider's bedtime treat
to casual chatter flung between thick accents and theives,
we are all involved in linear interpretations.
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Overall Rank: 7010
Posted: March 28, 2004 11:11 PM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2004 11:11 PM PST
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again, need more context methinks.
Some nice language though.