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Municipal park

by richa

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Apr 2004 · Edited 1 Apr 2004 · 6 comments

The council have planted five more of those japanese maple trees in a garden that is not ours. It is a shame that our small hamlet must come from different directions to agree, the money was wasted. That the garden is not ours.

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[8] Luzr 1-Apr-04/8:58 AM Reply
'have' should be 'has'. Other than that its true. -8-
[n/a] richa › Luzr 1-Apr-04/9:13 AM Reply
what is true?
[10] Shuushin 1-Apr-04/3:35 PM Reply
Hmmm. Strong methinks - strong.

and "have" should be "have" - you knew that, right?
[9] aliena 1-Apr-04/11:56 PM Reply
what is the fibal verdict? has or have?
[9] aliena › aliena 1-Apr-04/11:56 PM Reply
What is the final verdict? has or have?
[7] horus8 29-Apr-04/3:20 PM Reply
Are all of your poems about paralyzed acorns?