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lullaby

Member since 2004 · Posted 1 Apr 2004 · 6 comments

as the dawn begins to fade brightening up the dusk the stars begin to sing their tunes music for the angels' choir the songs gently fall to earth like feathers onto pillows into your sleeping ears across your angel smile bringing soft joy and calm into your resting mind soothing your busy soul caressing your loving heart the angels sing for you the stars sing to you bringing together precious harmony basking you in their love

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6 comments

[6] deleted user 1-Apr-04/12:31 PM Reply

A bit too pleasantly cutesie.

[7] Shuushin 1-Apr-04/6:01 PM Reply

too "listy" - yes, I made that word up.

Gimme so flow, gimme some "poetry".

[n/a] New Life Drug 1-Apr-04/6:48 PM Reply

...until you get raped in the middle of the night

[n/a] aliena 1-Apr-04/11:51 PM Reply

"as the dawn begins to fade
brightening up the dusk" How??

[2] Stephen Robins 2-Apr-04/4:53 AM Reply

Give me a poem less rubbish,
And i will it furnish,
A mark of more than two,
For at the moment it has made me revrse-void my lunch all over my seat.

[7] unouluvme 2-Apr-04/3:05 PM Reply

This isnt my style, but it isnt bad...like the descriptions