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The Day The World Blew Away

Member since 2004 · Posted 1 Apr 2004 · Edited 1 Apr 2004 · 4 comments

I wonder where everything goes When everything fades away Do we still exist? Or do we decay? I wonder what happens when the world blows away Do we blow away with it? Or do we stay? In a world of emptiness Nothing is sad Nothing is happy Everything is blank No fake smiles No more lies This is the day the world blew away Everyone is hollow in someway For we no longer exist We just decay The day the world blew away...

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[7] deleted user 2-Apr-04/6:38 AM Reply

Too many redundant lines. A good thought with a touch of ambiguity.

[0] zodiac › deleted user 2-Apr-04/7:49 AM Reply

re "Too many redundant lines": not to mention that most of them refer to the world fading/blowing away as if it were some kind of common occurence and not a mostly meaningless space-filler invented by bad post-grunge Christian rock bands to give the lighting technicians an excuse to cut all the stage-lights at once, inevitably making the crowd scream like crazy.

[7] Shuushin 2-Apr-04/5:25 PM Reply

Five gallons in a ten gallon hat.

[5] Bhaskaryya 8-Jan-05/8:54 AM Reply

That is NOT a glosa