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Free verse № 95909

Price of an Affair

Member since 2004 · Posted 2 Apr 2004 · 2 comments

I thought there was a fairy tale kind of love that existed but somehow my life got so fatefully twisted so I fell in love with a humble man and promised him my life we made the plans and set the day for me to be his wife but that fairy tale love, I dreamt of for years I'll remember your eyes, as I shed these tears I'll remember your voice, and your beautiful face I'll cherish my memories,as I recall your embrace but some things in life...just aren't fair, and it doesn't matter...how much you care and cause I won't hurt ,that humble man I deserve to hurt, for all that I am cause I let my soul be free, & found the fairy tale in me but not with mine, a humble man so I deserve to hurt, for all that I am cause it's still a fairy tale, as real as you are and you'll never be more mine, than a wish on a star you're a passionate lover,the eminence of desire our spiritual dance, lights my soul on fire but you're not mine, a humble man so I deserve to hurt, for all that I am

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[8] wilco 2-Apr-04/7:49 PM Reply
-2 for self-loathing
+8 for self-loathing
[5] deleted user 3-Apr-04/1:57 PM Reply
Could use half the words. Brevity best.