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Free verse № 96404

A PROMISE

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Apr 2004 · 0 comments

I LOVE YOU, FOR I MAY SAY "OH! DARLING YOU HAVE ME, I WISH DOES GIVE ME, WHAT I MAY SEEK, BE IT FOR YOU, FOR WHAT I MAY SAY YOU ARE THE MOON OF MY NIGHT YOU ARE THE ANGEL OF LOVING MY ALL YOU ARE THE RIVER OF MY HEART MY LOVE I SHALL GIVE, TO YOU MY LOVE FOR THE NIGHT IS TO BRIGHT, THE DAY TOO DARK, THE BIRDS ARE TO SWEET, THE MELODY IS TOO SOUR. FOR YOU SHALL BE MY PRIDE ONE DAY FOR YOU SHALL BE MY FRIEND TODAY AND YOU SHALL BE MY LOVE EVERYDAY. THIS IS WHAT I MAY ASK OF YOU TO UNITE TOGETHER FOR EVER SO FAR TO MAKE THAT DAY FOREVER IT MAT BE FOR SHALL I BE YOUR MOON AND YOU MY SKY FOR EVER SHALL I BE YOUR LOVING AND ALL". I GIVE THIS DAY MY PROMISE TO YOU THAT I SHALL BE IN LOVE FOREVER WITH YOU.

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