poemranker ::Endless Loop Of Dot Dot by Blindpoetry

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Free verse № 96516

Endless Loop Of Dot Dot

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Apr 2004 · Edited 8 Apr 2004 · 1 comment

What is good about nothing? Can't we change something In this neurotical world? dot dot And I will Crash me No one will stop me From making my own decisions... From learning from past mistakes... If I don't screw up... dot dot I will never learn Will it make me Crash? The number of times I've been insulted in the past Is un-countable Can I call names too? dot dot Why... That would be absurd... Now, I... Crash

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[8] Phalkon 17-May-04/5:38 PM Reply
dude, you should post a lot of this stuff into the blind forum!