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Limerick № 96590

Creation of all Things

by KnightofMidkemia

Member since 2004 · Posted 10 Apr 2004 · Edited 11 Apr 2004 · 6 comments

There was once a great Big Bang. From which the entire universe sprang Into galaxies, stars And lands afar. In the night sky it all does hang.

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[n/a] electroman1979 10-Apr-04/3:14 PM Reply
the big bang theory is a theory, however, i beleive it to be false
[5] deleted user 10-Apr-04/7:12 PM Reply
Good up to "bruang" which seems there only for the rhyme, a poor reason.
[n/a] KnightofMidkemia › deleted user 10-Apr-04/9:25 PM Reply
alright well, if you can find something else that rhymes with Bang or sprang that fits the theme then let me know.
[3] zodiac › KnightofMidkemia 11-Apr-04/6:20 AM Reply
Dang, gang, gangbang, harangue, slang, tang, [Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles villain] Krang. www.rhymezone.com
[7] Shuushin 11-Apr-04/7:56 AM Reply

I like its unusual slant (that its not about a person), but time to remake the last line.
[5] Edna Sweetlove 15-May-06/5:10 PM Reply
OK I suppose. Not exactly rib-tickling.