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The Idea of Fusion at the Beach (After Wallace Stevens)

Member since 2004 · Posted 14 Apr 2004 · 6 comments

Who has not felt unease at home abroad outside, a wild haven waiting in scorching sand, And seen all this -- heaven in the bending of larches, Twitch-pitchy pines and palmettos dancing; Twelve and a half candles burning into the sun -- and not realized that this is an insane adieu. We are like fire when language takes us. Soft stanzas haunt our bones. Arriving newer than stars, we sound like nothing but the wind.

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[9] Dan garcia-Black 14-Apr-04/7:46 PM Reply
"we sound like nothing but the wind"
Great thought because that's our job-- to teach the wind to speak.
[6] Bachus › Dan garcia-Black 15-Apr-04/3:49 PM Reply
Really, then why break it?
[9] Shuushin 14-Apr-04/8:17 PM Reply
I'll grant you the ending is Stevensish - I'm reminded more of Thoreau with the rest.

And there's not too much bad about that.
[n/a] Fear of Garbage 15-Apr-04/10:37 AM Reply
Haunting and arresting. Great first line.
[6] Bachus 15-Apr-04/3:48 PM Reply
Jesus Creased.
[8] richa 17-Apr-04/10:53 AM Reply
Well written, has a nice feel. I am left a little confused by the ending. You go from language as fire to language as soft stanzas to language as the wind.