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Free verse № 9782

You

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

You told me that you loved me and that you cared, But when I needed you the most, you were never there. You said I was the most fun and the best, But every night you wasnt with me, You were kissing all the rest. You said I was soo pretty and your heart belonged to me, But obviously there were some parts of you, That I Could Not See. You told me that you loved me and you were always mine, But When my back was turned, You were flirting all the time. You held me like you loved me and you kissed me like I was the only one, But When you were not with me, You were having way more fun. You were Suppose to be different and not like the other guys, But you were the same, You Broke my Heart with lies.

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[6] Jeremi B. Handrinos 9-Nov-03/5:36 AM Reply
Indubetedly.