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sweet surrender

Member since 2004 · Posted 26 Apr 2004 · Edited 11 Jun 2004 · 6 comments

if i could touch and kiss you only in my dreams then i never want to wake up i'll probably just stay here in eternal bliss and kiss you over and over but dreams are made in fact it might be soon a time will come for you and me to finally be together i'd be beside you, i hope you smile and whisper sweet nothings to my ear as i assure you that i never would leave never , again, never might i add that dreams were made to be realized not kept, locked up, like a princess in a fairy tale and that we have a choice always, and forever to either be apart or in sweet solitude's surrender

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[7] deleted user 26-Apr-04/7:34 AM Reply

A great thought. Just don't send it to him! This kinda stuff drives 'em off. You've got to trust me on this.

[7] wilco › deleted user 26-Apr-04/12:44 PM Reply

Truth.

[10] Stephen Robins 27-Apr-04/6:18 AM Reply

I laughed so hard as I read this that I soiled my new pair of Thomas Pink boxer shorts and have had to dispose of them out of the window in the loo!

Thanks!

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[7] Shuushin 27-Apr-04/7:10 AM Reply

you said "dreams are to be realized" then added it again.

[0] god'swife 11-Jun-04/8:57 AM Reply

How is this a poem? Are you a mental retard?

[6] zodiac 12-Jun-04/10:26 AM Reply

If you re-post this an infinite number of times to be read by an infinite number of retards, do you suppose you'll eventually hit on a group that doesn't mind how your title's entirely copped from Sarah Maclachlan?

No, wait, I see now. You hadn't even thought of that song, you just happen to think that surrender is sweet. Bow'ls to you, francis. Bow'ls and bow'ls.