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Free verse № 99833

Falling

Member since 2004 · Posted 1 May 2004 · 1 comment

The touch of your lips The warmth of your embrace I could never tell you All the things I think My mind is overflowing With the beauty you behold Everywhere I look I seem to see your face Everytime I breathe I can only smell you I'm not quite falling But when I do I don't want you there to catch me I want you to be falling too

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[8] etherealmaiden 2-May-04/12:31 PM Reply
very cute. I like the thought of both falling in love at the same time. :)