INTRANSIT6 May 2004

That's the wierd thing. The actual event happened in sort of slow motion so I went space crazy in the first. I loved it that way but something still didn't seem right. I can't argue with squiggles about the crit either though. This will be the second poem I have overanalyzed/overworked, which honestly pains me more than dropping it and moving on. im so cornfused.