poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Time Imperfect by MacFrantic.

Shuushin21 Jun 2004

Mac-Daddy-Fan, nice job.

I wouldn't mind seeing a version that is less of a series of snapshots, less list-like.

should "bearing" be "baring" as in exposing themselves?

So, although I'd prefer a bit more flow, these ideas leave some solid impressions anyway.