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ReplyTo a comment on The bad news is his bones are like rubber by Venus.

Shuushin29 Jul 2004

Maybe too cryptic. I can see how it might cathartic somehow, but - "what's in it for me?"

"audible hint of condemnation"... what is that, exactly?

Interesting even after my gripes, has a nice cadence - I just want it to mean something without too much trouble (some, is fine).