-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.24 Aug 2002

Who the fuck knows what this site is... since you ask for my opinion, whether in jest or not, I'll give it to you. However, don't expect it to be insightful (and above all, try not to be constrained, since I have a nasty habit of dictating to people and trying to force them into playing by my petty rules). The writing is pleasing, and what imagery I can 'get' is interesting, but I don't understand what is supposed to be going on 'really'. I also thought the second half of the fourth stanza (paragraph, whatever it's called) is hard on the eyes. It reminds me of Erik the fucking Viking, or something. If there was a greased old man in the sea it would be better in my estimation.