poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on endless eternity: by Sapphire.

poetandknowit25 Aug 2002

And here I thought this was going to be a descent poem. The title sucks, but the poem opens in okay fashion and then---boom, out of nowhere comes the worst line ever written: "time suckles of mother natures teat." I laughed all the way to the pisser, pissed all over myself from laughing so hard.