poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Everglades parkway by INTRANSIT.

edpeterson1 Nov 2004

The closest takes flight arcing in earnest.
"Oh, I know you didn't just..."
I close one eye and hunker
expecting a sudden and bleeding passenger.


I click on the four-ways and ease
to the shoulder.


The sentence structure becomes repetitive, with all the "I-verb-object"