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ReplyTo a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina.

Bachus9 Nov 2004

Ah "crusty and clean"
Like brain cancer.

the third stanza
is utter crap, but...

I didn't know weaker defense was dusty?
And I've never seen snow with dust, because
dust is dry, do you mean silt? or dusty snow?

Only you could make an afternoon walk, this
fucking confusing.