SupremeDreamer31 Jan 2005

Rated R for language and explicit content.
An arrogant aside, beautifully stunning.
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Your as large as life, written to be.


I'd rewrite that to:

Rated R for language and explicit content-- (or ;)
arrogance aside, absolutely stunning.

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You're larger than life, written to be.


Beautifully stunning is just redundant, and it's always good to clarify the use of a contraction ole comrade.

That said, have a hearty nine.