anonymous9 May 2002

Attention: webmaster. Please fix the HTML code on this one. Good story. I don't like how you glorify violence, though. That's really nasty. In English, there is no word "alls." Just say "All I said was," or "All I did was." You can edit the poem yourself on this site. By the way, I hope you forget about this loser and meet a real man. You sound like an interesting, passionate woman who any real man would be happy and grateful to be with. Take care.